Careful thought, maximum effort and time well-invested in planning always pays off when it comes to the point of writing. These children's 'big writes' prove that in the quality of the setting descriptions, and in the language choices that show the movements and actions of their characters. Maintaining the interest of the reader is key, and with a variety of sentence starters along with adjusting sentence lengths will definitely bring tension and suspense to our audiences. 

These are remarkable Year 6 - very well done!